I actually really like your monster line-up. good job with that.
runnning 3 mst and heavy is a bit much in my opinion...take our heavy or one mst. I think you should take out heavy cuz I found it to be less effective anyway since most people caution heavy storm now.
do you have burial from the D.D.? awesome card in hyperion/fairies. Of course, if you're more focused on syncrhos though it's not as effective, but seems like it would work fine anyway considering you run 3 hyperions.
if you're running reckless greed, run 3 or don't run any. cards from the sky gives you the 2 draws without making you miss your next 2 pluses. running 3 at once is sweet cuz you wait to get them all in hand, set, opponent's turn and you get +6 from draws, -3 from resolving greeds, and only miss 2 for a grand total of +1 instead of -1.
Solemn warnings. Used to be expensive, but they've been reprinted. I found them as cheap as $6 a piece, I'm sure you can afford them. I don't like compuls in this deck cuz it doesnt give you any pluses against your opponent and you aren't running any cards where it'd help to bounce back your own. might as well take out that sakuretsu too, then add 2 warnings. a 2nd D prison isn't necessary anyway if you have big bad monsters like hyperion/kristya/trish out, and if you don't, you're deck isn't doing what it's supposed to so you might as well call it a lose.
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