pretty nice, but I don't personally like monolph. I'd run 3 aeolo, just because his eff is too good not to run 3. Also try running the tribute jurracs, they aren't hard to get out(stauriko makes it too easy and herra makes a good tribute as well)and they beat ur opponent hard.
I also only run 2 velo because so many monster effs in this format just destroy monsters anyway, so no one ends up attacking him in the first place. it does happen, but not so much in this format.
You might want to try taking out cards that give you -1. Remember that basics to deck building/winning is not just lp(you only need 1 to win), but card advantage. if I have one beasty monster on the field and two cards face-down with no hand, and my opponent has no cards on the field and 5 cards in hand, I am losing.
replace dark bribe with seven tools/magic drain. you don't want cards that -1 you and then give your opponent +1.
Magic cylinder=bad. its a -1 for you and your opponent still has that monster to atk next turn with. you can do just as much dmg with a beasty jurrac without getting that -1.
Jurassic world isn't work the +300 atk points. solidarity works just fine and most jurracs have 1700+ atk anyway so the boost is nice, but really unnecessary. add foolish burial, one for one, pot of dualities, or even mst/heavy storm. where are those anyway?!?!?!